As earlier said; Your animation style is looking fine and the voice acting is good (some ups and downs with the quality thought). However, the story lacks and it is only holding up because of jokes and shock value. Though I have the privilege to actually know you, and know that you didn't want to focus at story building in this episode, I won't make that an effect on my review. After all, Everything you make got to have someone to tell you the better.
I enjoyed the content of this video and I would recommend my friends to watch it, not because of the story or any depth though, but because it will make them laugh.
4/5, well done, but try to balance the elements of story and comedy for part 2, 3, 4, etc.